User talk:Joannaolsen12/School uniform

Ideas for Improvement
Hey Joanna!

Your article looks great! Good content, concepts and ideas. Your sentence structure is flawless, and I really enjoyed reading through these edits you have made.

The only thing I think I saw was just maybe using a few more sources interchangeably throughout the paper. I think it would improve your credibility and also help the dynamic of your article.

Good luck! And happy editing. :)

Marsmorg (talk) 17:47, 28 October 2022 (UTC)