User talk:Job6750

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Hello, Job6750, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Jane Priestman
Thanks for attempting to expand and improve the Jane Priestman article. However, it would be beneficial to add inline citations, particularly for paragraphs such as "Priestman is credited for opening doors for women all over the UK... She was able to successfully perform her duties with excellence, in the way any man could", and "She won this at age 85, because she had the vision that architecture could change lives... Current and future generations are able to be seen differently due to the work that Jane Priestman has accomplished."

These are really the sort of statements that you could get away with (just about) in a student essay, but not on Wikipedia. I don't want to discourage you, but someone will probably remove them sooner rather than later.

If you want any help or advice, by all means ask here, or on Talk:Jane Priestman, and I'll do my best to help. Cheers. Sionk (talk) 20:31, 29 November 2017 (UTC)