User talk:Jocelyndw

G'day,

it is great to see the work you are doing on the DP page.

Can I suggest four things, two major, two minor.

(i) the page is currently very technical. Can you make more of an effort to make the analysis understandable for normal readers? Currently, I don;t think anyone without some background in GB can follow the article.

(ii) there should be a little more discussion of the fact that this is only the majority position in GB. See for example:

Meyers, Adam (1995). The NP Analysis of NP. Papers from the 31st Regional. Meeting of the Chicago Linguistic Society, pp. 329-342. Mihaljević, Milan (1990).

(iii) I didn't understand the first sentence so I boldy rewrote it :-).

(iv) I think if you make the constituent label a subscript is is easier to read: [NP Det [N N]] vs [NP Det [N N]]. What do you think?

Francis Bond (talk) 10:37, 30 November 2013 (UTC)

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Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 09:10, 10 December 2013 (UTC)