User talk:JoeNavek/Language acquisition by deaf children/Versa1 Peer Review

Peer review
Hi Kevan! Hopefully, my comments will show up. Reading through the article I noticed that it frequently brings up cochlear implants; they are mentioned repeatedly throughout - even though there is a section with the heading 'cochlear implants'- but the information seems unbalanced. There are also assumptions made about 'other domains of development' and language learning that need more fleshing out and do not have enough sources to support the claims like in the section about social-emotional development and the claim about "proper emotional development". The headings can be redone to be a little more descriptive, and maybe some sections can be combined so that they are more clear, for example, some of the factual content (with appropriate citations) under the header of 'role of input and the environment' could be helpful in setting up the article if it was used in the first intro paragraph. Happy editing! Versa1 (talk) 04:42, 26 September 2019 (UTC)