User talk:Joecool2014/Manuel de Dios Unanue

Usirjkelly peer review
1. Your article draft is very informative. I really liked the impact section. It gave me a feel of how much this journalist put on the line and the positive after effects of his work. 2. I felt like the personal section was a little hard to read. Maybe seperating the dates? I understand the dates are very important and you need them but I would suggest spacing them farther apart to keep it easy to read. I really enjoyed your article, very interesting!

Peer Review
Your article is well-developed and detailed. It's an interesting read as well. I don't have much to say that jkelley hasn't already said. Great work! Kmtedrow (talk) 00:14, 26 October 2012 (UTC)