User talk:Joedumarango

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Speedy deletion nomination of Trentillium Fund


A tag has been placed on Trentillium Fund requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A7 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article appears to be about a company, corporation or organization, but it does not credibly indicate how or why the subject is important or significant: that is, why an article about that subject should be included in an encyclopedia. Under the criteria for speedy deletion, such articles may be deleted at any time. Please read more about what is generally accepted as notable.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be removed without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. KGirl (Wanna chat?) 12:32, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of "OptometRx"
OptometRx, a page you created, has been tagged for deletion, as it meets one or more of the criteria for speedy deletion; specifically, it is obvious advertising or promotional material.

You are welcome to contribute content that complies with our content policies and any applicable inclusion guidelines. However, please do not simply re-create the page with the same content, or remove the speedy deletion tag from the page. You can contest the deletion by clicking the "Contest this speedy deletion" button inside the speedy deletion tag. You may also wish to read our introduction to editing and guide to writing your first article.

Thank you. Hayman30 (talk) 12:34, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

August 2017
Welcome to Wikipedia. It might not have been your intention, but you removed a speedy deletion tag from OptometRx, a page you have created yourself. If you believe the page should not be deleted, you may contest the deletion by clicking on the button that says: Contest this speedy deletion which appears inside the speedy deletion notice. This will allow you to make your case on the talk page. Administrators will consider your reasoning before deciding what to do with the page. Thank you. Hayman30 (talk) 12:36, 21 August 2017 (UTC)

Your contested deletions
You have contested the deletions of OptometRx and Trentillium Fund, two articles that you created. Your argument at Talk:Trentillium Fund is:
 * This article should not be speedily deleted for lack of asserted importance because the company is derived of former graduates of Princeton, Harvard, and Cambridge- most who have worked in the world of artificial intelligence. The company also manages many healthcare providers and is an upcoming VC in Orange County.

while your argument at Talk:OptometRx is:
 * This page is not unambiguously promotional, because its the first company Trentillium Fund has invested to implement machine learning analytics with the practice of Optometry. It's the first A.I. sponsored location in Hacienda Heights... With the use of artificial intelligence, OptometRx in Hacienda Heights offers its patients frames and glasses designed for each person according to personal preferences. And if the patients have a particular need different from what is available, they are ever ready to recommend similar solutions at the comfort of the individual.

In both of these arguments, you have failed to address the concern at hand. For Trillium, the concern is that the company does not meet Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion for companies and organizations. While the company may become notable, based on the perceived intelligence of its founders and the possibility that that their business model might take off, the company can only be verified to be notable already based on the existence of significant independent media coverage, for which you have provided no evidence. Many VC companies are founded by smart people, but they don't become notable until they have achieved something that somebody else took note of and took the time to write about.

As for OptometRx, whether or not the company is notable isn't really relevant to the discussion at hand. You've basically written an advertisement for the company, and this is absolutely disallowed at Wikipedia. Your argument for prevent its deletion just delves deeper into ad-speak. In order for this article to be allowed, you would have to demonstrate (with WP:RS) that this is indeed the very first optician practice to utilize AI in a meaningful fashion to service its customers, and that this use of AI was somehow groundbreaking (as opposed to just the next clever trick to be done with AI after all of the other clever tricks that have been done with AI in the past few years). WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 13:07, 21 August 2017 (UTC)