User talk:Joegorrell/sandbox

Peer Review

 * Open the article with a general statement about Ethiopia's human rights record rather than a report. The report's information is good content, but provide an opening statement to give a brief overview of the article's subject matter.
 * The "Historical situation" section would flow better with the rest of the article if placed as one of the first sections of the article. Consider renaming this section "Historical background" or simply "Background." The graphic is informative; a bit more clarification is needed in the opening statement about what exactly is being measured ("Ethiopia's ratings" is currently used. Is this a measure of solely political freedom, is famine or poverty accounted for, etc.).
 * Under "Incidents," switch the first and second paragraphs. The first one is a specific instance whereas the second one is a report, a more broad subject.
 * The "Sexual violence" and "Murder of 'cursed' children" would benefit from more content, especially the latter. Both subjects have a lot of potential content that could be added, such as breakdowns by ethnicity, religion, and region.