User talk:Joel.uey

Welcome!
Hello, Joel.uey, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback request
Hi Joel. I saw your request for feedback. Is there something I can help you with? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:36, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi Ian. I would like some feedback on my formatting and tone for my article. Joel.uey (talk) 18:23, 13 March 2016 (UTC)Joel


 * Hi Joel. I made a few more fixes to your draft that I had missed before (mostly, you shouldn't be writing in the first person ("we") or speculating ("we can imagine"). I also added links to other articles that might help the reader learn more about various topics you've mentioned. Overall, good work. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:04, 14 March 2016 (UTC)