User talk:Joestoff/ESports in China

1. The contents of the article seem good and the article does well in addressing the main points and explaining what's ESport is about. The thing that impressed me about your article was you had a lot of information about ESport, and you have great sources.

2. I think the information on the article that you have right now look good to me. However, you might want to include a picture and a reference list of comments. I think if you could include these elements, your wiki page would be more awesome and comprehensive for the future. That would make your article look so much better.

3. I do think the article you have here would be applicable to my own article because you're talking about ESport in Asia. My article was the most popular game in China. So, I think we have a very similar article.