User talk:Joey9201/sandbox

KaNesha's peer review
The topic and the information presented in the article relevant to each other. The article seems to have some sentence and grammatical errors within the first paragraph second section it mentions the word organization and its relation to the operations of public relations, but it is spelled "organisations's" rather than the correct way. There are uses of too many words within the sentences in the first paragraph. There is so much repetition in the first paragraph with describing public relations and how it has evolved. I do think that some of the information could have been discussed in the sections"History" or "tactics". The structure of the article is organized good. The tactics section includes a definition/ explanation of words that many may not be familiar with to make topics clear that is great. The use of the sources were good.