User talk:Joey Landriault/sandbox


 * 1. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?;

Yes, the article is neutral it speaks about Cheechoo in an unbiased way but it still gives us an accurate description of his careers and accomplishments. There are no claims or frames, the article is pretty straight forward about who he is as a person and as a player.


 * 2. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?

No, all the information is up to date, including the most recent added this month. However, I think there should be more information on Cheechoo's retirement. So far there is only one sentence dedicated to his retirement and there could be more said about where and when the retirement took place.


 * 3. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

Everything in this article I feel is relevant, However I feel that the information could be more better constructed. At the end of the article there is information in a paragraph that has sentences that have little to do with each other and should be broken up into separate paragraphs. Different paragraphs for different information would make the article a lot less confusing to read.

Joey Landriault (talk) 22:23, 15 March 2018 (UTC)


 * After Cheechoo announced his retirement, Sharks general manager Doug Wilson commented about Cheechoo’s background. Wilson talked about the fact that he was a player who was able to have great success from a remote area of Canada.


 * When Cheechoo was 14 years old he left his home to further his hockey career, Cheechoo moved to Timmins Ontario, around 300 km away from his hometown. Cheechoo was often homesick and found himself crying to sleep at night as he was very close with his family. 


 * Cheechoo has been known to go out of his way and talk to children and interact with those who admire him.

Joey Landriault (talk) 18:45, 21 March 2018 (UTC)