User talk:Joeyma252

Welcome!
Hello, Joeyma252, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:48, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Checking in
I'm not seeing any progress since my last comment. Where is your annotated bibliography, and 1000 words added to the article? Feel free to email me if you have questions.

Next step is to peer review one of your classmate’s articles. Like your own, these should be on their sandbox pages. You should be able to see who is assigned each article on the Assigned Articles tab, so click on their username to find their sandbox. Remember, you had a training on this, which you can rely on. Feel free to email me if you have questions. --Theredproject (talk) 23:29, 1 December 2019 (UTC)

Article content in wrong place
Hi Joeyma252, you put the following content on my talk page, and I think it was misplaced. My talk page is a place to leave me questions. Did you have questions about the following text? I have removed it and added it to the collapsed section below. A couple of notes: if you plan on adding this content to Wikipedia, you will need to add many citations. Where did this content come from? You need to include citations to show that this is verifiable. I think you will also need to make adjustments to the tone of the content. Wikipedia articles should not come across as promotional. You should not refer to the subjects of biographies as "extremely bright" or "intelligent", as a "stand out", or as "a normal human being". Wikipedia articles should have just the facts--you can only include content if it has been said before by a reliable source. Let me know if you have questions. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:29, 13 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi following up on this, Elysia (Wiki Ed)'s comments are spot on. You need to follow this guidance in order to have your edits successfully posted without being reverted.
 * You need to work on your Neutral point of view
 * You need to add citations for every claim. For your purposes, you can think about this as pretty much one citation for every sentence. As we have discussed, you can reuse citations, but you have to have them there.
 * You need to copyedit for grammar.
 * You can see all of this in these sentences, for example: "When we talk about a well, know female programmers, the name that always comes to our mind is non-other than Corrine Yu who is mainly a female game programmer. Yu is known to have born as well as brought up in Hong Kong. In the case of education, Corrine Yu has mainly achieved bounds as well as leaps." You are going to need to work on this before your edits will be accepted. --Theredproject (talk) 22:47, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Also, I have looked through your contributions, and I don't see a peer review of one of your classmates' work. If I have missed the edits, please let me know. --Theredproject (talk) 22:48, 14 December 2019 (UTC)