User talk:Johandley/sandbox

Suggestions/Notes
KzK100 (talk) 19:50, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
 * When you talk about different diverse characters on television what type of characters are they? Are they being used in a “stereotypical” way? I think you should go more into detail about what these are.
 * What can you do to understand these individual’s in the LGBT community?
 * In a lot of the paragraphs you say “these types of people” and I think you should be specific about who you are talking about
 * Do you have your references down for each paragraph?
 * What studies does the American Psychological Association conduct? (“These studies”)
 * For the fifth paragraph talking about societies assumptions about children’s upbringing in a heterosexual family could you maybe talk more about it? Showing the other side of the argument?