User talk:Johannes Maximilian/Archives 2024/March

Draft:Albo
Hello Johannes. First of all, thank you very much for spending time on the Albo draft. I am writing to you because the argument for declining to publish it is the lack of quality references or recognized media. However, I would like you to rethink this decision. I have searched more than 30 references to contrast the information and some of them are from important media in your country or even internationally. You will see in the list of references that I have included information from Bloomberg, Forbes, El Economista or Expansión. Some may not be as relevant and I wish they were all English speaking, however Albo is a Mexican bank and I have not found so many references in English speaking media.

For these reasons I ask you to please rethink the possible publication of the draft and if it is for another reason, I would love to know and see if I can solve it. I believe that the page has relevance, being a state financial entity.

Thanks, Seyanko (talk) 14:56, 7 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Fábrica de Moneda
Hi Johannes. Can you re-review the Draft article Fábrica de Moneda. The article has been complemented with additional sources, both from main and third-party sources. Thank you.

Thanks, Anfecaro (talk) 12:49, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft: Prophet VS
Hi Johannes. I'm curious why this draft was declined. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Prophet_VS

There are numerous citations that are used elsewhere on other pages, and then there are similar pages in the same synthesizer family such as the Sequential Six-Trak that have absolutely no references at all. What references do you feel are unreliable? All are either directly referencing the synth and instruments in general and have been used on other pages, or they are referencing people who worked on the synth directly. Shalebridger (talk) 00:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Rudolf_Gonzalez
Can you please clarify the details about "This draft is a copyright violation collection?" Thank you. Wikiwriterhippo (talk) 21:05, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Wash My Soul In The River's Flow
Hi Johannes, i am new to wiki as of a few months. You reviewed my first article "Draft:Wash My Soul In The River's Flow". I tried really hard to follow the guidelines but realise that I had links to IMBD to try and verify who some of the film making team were (cinematographer, director). I realise that I must ony be able to use wikipedia links in the body copy. Is this correct? If so I have made the edits. If you have any other hot tips for my first film submission please let me know. I am currently looking into how to use the film template. Thanks a million kim alice film Kim alice film (talk) 01:25, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

"EFi" diesel
Toyota and Nissan both started fitting electronically controlled, high pressure fuel pumps to some swirl chamber diesel engines in the 1980s. Toyota called it a "computer-controlled diesel engine" and marketed it as EFi. See this photo of the engine. This concept has been linked this to Electronic Diesel Control, would you say that is the correct article? Thanks,  Mr.choppers &#124;   ✎  01:18, 19 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Cheers mate, there's multiple things I can address here, so stay tuned:
 * In a conventional Diesel engine, fuel pumps and fuel injection pumps are, in most cases, not the same device. The fuel pump feeds the fuel injection pump which then in turn creates the fuel injection pressure. (In case you thought about it, please ignore Volkswagen's Pumpe-Düse-System for a while.)
 * Diesel engines have a very high compression, which means that the fuel injector has to overcome this pressure. Furthermore, due to the Diesel operating principle, the oxygen has to diffuse into the combusting fuel during the combistion event. The fuel droplets undergo a rapid change of phase from liquid to gas, beginning with the outer layer. Thus, smaller fuel droplets improve combustion quality in a Diesel engine, and since droplet size correlates with injection pressure, all Diesel engines with hydraulic fuel injection systems (all modern Diesels) must always have a high-pressure fuel injection system. Low-pressure or non-high-pressure fuel injection systems (e.g. a Bosch K-Jetronic) can never work with a Diesel engine.
 * We can differentiate between conventional high-pressure fuel injection systems which operate with fuel pressure levels of 15 to 25 MPa, and post 1990s systems with pressure levels of 180 to 300 MPa. Toyota has definitely not employed the latter in the early 1980s, so speaking of a "high-pressure" system is not really useful in this context.
 * The Diesel engine operates on quality torque control, i.e., the torque output is manipulated by changing the injected fuel mass to change lambda. Conventional diesel fuel injection systems thus don't need to adjust the mixture constantly to make it as close to lambda=1 as possible. Thus, equipping Diesel engines with ECUs has not been top priority in motor vehicle Diesel engine development. As far as I'm concerned, the first series-production Diesel ECU was used in the Mercedes-Benz OM 442 V8 (NG lorry), and later the BMW M21 straight-6 (used in late E28 and early E34 cars). I haven't quite heard of Nissan having a similar system in the early 1980s; I shall have a look at this, but honestly I don't quite think that their system is a comprehensive Diesel ECU. Maybe it's something (in principle) like a bolt-on system that "improves" the already existing helix-controlled injection pump? I shall have a look. Best regards, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 13:24, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Interesting! Toyota have actually made a very sophisticated Diesel ECU in the early 1980s; it is in fact a "bolt-on solution" for a Bosch Distributor-type injection pump, but functions like one would expect from a regular Diesel engine ECU. I didn't know this. So, to answer your question, Toyota's system is not similar in concept to an ECU, it incorporates an actual digial ECU. Best regards, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 20:09, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 20:09, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Nice, thanks - I had a general idea, but it always looked weird to see EFi on diesels. Should this be mentioned at Electronic Diesel Control? Feels worthy of inclusion.  Mr.choppers &#124;   ✎  18:56, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Yes definitely! Best, --Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 19:25, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft: Farisha Ishak
Hi Johannes,

Hope you are well! You previously reviewed my draft page for Farisha Ishak in late January. I have corrected the issues you raised and made further improvements, but no one has reviewed the draft since I re-submitted it for approval a few days later.

If you have a chance, could you evaluate whether the page is ready for approval? I would greatly appreciate. Thank you!

Draft:Farisha Ishak

Best Regards,

User Anilorac207 Anilorac207 (talk) 03:18, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Draft: Randy Tat
Hi Johannes, I hope you are doing well!

You previously reviewed my draft page for the American film and TV producer Randy Tat and rejected it for lacking reliable sources.

I am relatively new user on Wikipedia and would appreciate any help or advice from you with understanding Wikipedia's policies on reliable sources for biographies of living persons. I have written a handful of pages before about books which have been accepted, but from my research I understand that sourcing policies for biographies about living people are much stricter than they are for entries about books.

Could you please direct me in the right direction on how I can modify my draft page in order to get it to an acceptable state for publishing?

For example, if I removed all of the text/citations that are considered 'unreliable' would that be sufficient for re-submitting my draft? How best could I go about determining which sources are reliable and which are not? Any help or advice would be appreciated.

Cheers! Digitalaudioworkstation (talk) 18:23, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Request on 12:31:08, 24 March 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by 173.242.244.139
The reviewer has mentioned that my references are not reliable. All my references are from published, unsolicited, online sources. There are magazine references I could add, but how would the review gain access to such magazines, as they are in publications in UK, Germany, France, etc?

173.242.244.139 (talk) 12:31, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Request for edit to draft page Will Corbett, stage actor
Hello Johannes. I see you've requested removal of external links from the draft page for Will Corbett, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Will_Corbett. Which links are you referring to? I have counted two links to external wikis (non-US wikis), that are relevant to the topic in that section of the body. Is there a way to include links from foreign wikis, without having them act as external links? Mu5sic5 (talk) 14:31, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

Comprehension of JSONPath draft
Hi Johannes. I'm amenable to improving the text, but it would be helpful to know what you think may be incomprehensible. Please compare JSON as JSONPath is in the same subject area and at a similar level of technical depth. Thanks! Glyn normington (talk) 03:44, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Please approve the pending submission of Ryoko Maekawa
Hi @Johannes Maximilian please approve request submission of Ryoko Maekawa Lovemuhcko (talk) 14:48, 25 March 2024 (UTC)