User talk:John-Robert Boyd/Pinus serotina

Peer Review
'''1.    First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?'''

Good wording for descriptions, also had a good section about

'''2.    What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?'''

Changes to Pinus in the document to be italicized, also changing all the headers your have to a Heading instead of a Sub-header

3.    What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

Spelling and ensuring the works are in the correct form for what is trying to be said. Along with changing of Sub headers to Headers

'''4.    Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!'''

The disease and Pest section was very good and i will most likely add in a section about potential pest and disease into my wiki.

Crbrurris21 (talk) 22:56, 22 November 2023 (UTC)