User talk:John7512

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It may be best for you to look over the WP policy for biographies of living persons. Pages like Shane Salerno are full of opinion, unsourced material and are not formatted ocrrectly (things we want to avoid). Before reverting edits from other editors, take a look at other biographies and look at how they are formatted. I think it may help.

Jim Steele (talk) 11:40, 8 April 2010 (UTC)


 * John, it's good you've added sources but not all of them are reliable. Moreover, the bigger issue is a conflict of interest. Articles that are biographies of living people are supposed to meet standards and one of the most important is to maintain a neutral point of view. As someone else mentioned, the artilce is blatantly promotional and flowery. As for your point about the section on the author there is no listing of this so-called documentary on IMDB nor any other reliable source. So that's why I deleted it. As you learn the ropes here you will see much is trial and error and including that section fell with a thud in the latter.

Jim Steele (talk) 23:43, 8 April 2010 (UTC)