User talk:John H Shannon

Welcome
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia! I notice you've been editing on behalf of David MacDougall. Please familiarise yourself with our policies on Conflict of Interest at WP:COI and our policies on reliable sourcing at WP:RS. Every line has to have a reliable, independent citation, so I have removed the content you added in lead. You may add it again with reliable references (you will find the content through Article history). Please have a look at how the rest of the article is sourced, or look at The Doon School Quintet as an example. This is not David MacDougall's personal webpage and only the most notable awards are usually mentioned in the infobox. I've removed the rest. Please go through the policies and ensure all your edits in the future are reliably sourced. Thank you! TerentiusNew (talk) 08:03, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks TerentiusNew. I'll do better next time.  Do I got references!!!

--John H Shannon (talk) 20:30, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Okay, that's great. Happy editing! TerentiusNew (talk) 13:04, 25 July 2020 (UTC)

added paragraph PS
And much improved! John H Shannon (talk) 21:09, 28 July 2020 (UTC)