User talk:John Oluwatosin Macaulay

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chef Eros (May 15)
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 DGG ( talk ) 07:02, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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John Oluwatosin Macaulay (talk) 10:59, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chef Eros (May 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Lopifalko was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Lopifalko (talk) 11:26, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

how to fix it
First, remove every adjective.

Then, remove every sentence that says how good you are, as distinct from what it is that you have done.

After that it wil be easierto se if there is enough good content and sourcing for an article.  DGG ( talk ) 05:10, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

Alright sir. Thank you for your reply. Nevertheless, the article is not about me. But I understand and accept your corrections. John Oluwatosin Macaulay (talk) 07:45, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

Draft:Chef Eros concern
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Your draft article, Draft:Chef Eros


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