User talk:John k oshea

This article on "what was the race of the [ancient] Egyptians " is flawed at the start. It states that '83' mummies found near Cairo were examined and found to have origins from all over the middle east and sub Africa, but it does not state the AGE of the mummies. The ancient Egyptians were certainly not Arab or Turkish; the Turks were not even in Asia minor at the time of Christ, let alone at the height of the new Kingdom. It seems like a PC type supposition and is not helpful. There are images of Egyptian peoples from what is called late Roman times, saying they are all colors and so forth- so what? The question is about the original inhabitants of Egypt which would be circa 1000 BC at the latest, By Roman times the population of Egypt was mixed with Greek, Phoenician, Spanish, Jewish and other Mediterranean and African peoples. Please be more precise, do not try to validate modern dogmatic truisms with half baked research notes. --John k oshea (talk) 06:59, 14 September 2018 (UTC)--John k oshea (talk) 06:59, 14 September 2018 (UTC)--John k oshea (talk) 06:59, 14 September 2018 (UTC)--06:59, 14 September 2018 (UTC)John k oshea (talk)

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David. moreno 72   07:27, 14 September 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 14)
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David. moreno 72   08:27, 14 September 2018 (UTC)