User talk:Johnmcmichael/sandbox

John has added a great deal of substance to this previously sparse article, particularly by addressing the arc of Bonfigli's career and his legacy in other artists. One way that this article could further be improved is with minor word choice and punctuation improvements (primarily painted frescoes rather than painted primarily frescoes, best preserved work rather than most preserved work, etc), and (as always) by adding more information. That said, the addition not only of more, reputable information but also of images to this page has added a great deal. If descriptions of the major works listed in the final section could be added, that would contribute something significant to the article as well. Grevs152 (talk) 18:48, 7 March 2017 (UTC)