User talk:Johnnybermudez

Your submission at Articles for creation: Johnny Bermudez (July 25)
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McMatter (talk)/(contrib) 04:47, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Johnnybermudez, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you created or edited appears to be an article about yourself. Creating an autobiography is a common mistake made by new Wikipedians—as this is an encyclopedia, we wouldn't expect to have an article about every contributor. We require individuals to meet Wikipedia's definition of a notable person to accept articles about them.

The page you created about yourself may well be deleted from the encyclopedia. If it is deleted and you wish to retrieve its contents, don't hesitate to ask anyone from this list and they will copy it to your user page. If your contributions to an existing article about yourself are undone and you wish to add to it, please propose the changes on its talk page.

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You have an obvious conflict of interest, please don't write about yourself, your friends or relatives and read the guidance below:
 * When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
 * Your refs were not in line, so we don't know what fact each supports, they were all bare urls, and most, if not all, were inappropriate as independent third-party refs. How is your FaceBook page or an interview with you an independent source?
 * I don't know if you meet the notability criteria I've linked above, but note that neither being an NFL agent or a professional actor necessarily makes you notable enough for an article here, this isn't social media.


 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * I've seen worse, but using your first name and giving opinions like "beloved" or "legendary" isn't encyclopaedic.


 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.
 * I didn't check for copyright because of the other problems

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  14:28, 25 July 2022 (UTC)
 * You didn't give any wikilinks, such as NFL, Flatbush, Brooklyn, Law & Order SVU
 * You said "Filmography Please reference imdb submission below.". No, if you want a filmography, you put it in the article