User talk:JohnsonDirectWI

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. However, the reviewer felt that a few things need to be fixed before it is accepted. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved. (You can do this by adding the text to the top of the article.)


 * To edit the submission, you can use the edit button at the top of the article, near the search bar
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Help desk or the [ reviewer's talk page]. Alternatively you can ask a reviewer questions via live help
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! ῤerspeκὖlὖm   in ænigmate  (talk) (spy)  11:18, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Hi, your article has a few sentences that seem to be too much like an advertisement for the company and its products. The entry should be encyclopaedic in nature and therefore only stick to facts that can be referenced, not opinion. If you can correct this then please feel free to re-submit your article for review. ῤerspeκὖlὖm  in ænigmate  (talk) (spy)  11:18, 28 January 2012 (UTC)