User talk:Johnvihuela

John Griffiths (Musician)
Hello. Thank you for your message.

Because the article was deleted due to copyright concerns, I'm not allowed to restore it. However, almost all of it was copied and pasted from this website. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 01:03, 25 January 2011 (UTC)

John Griffiths (musician)
Hi. Thank you for your message. The article looks good. There are two "problems" that I see. Wikipedia editors prefer to see articles referenced using inline citations (footnotes) instead of a list of references. Also, no other articles link to this article (beside the disambiguation page). The first issue isn't a big deal, but you should try to add footnotes at some point. To fix the second issue, find appropriate places to mention John Griffiths. Offhand, Vihuela and Lute seem like good candidates. See if there's a good way to mention Mr. Griffiths without being obtrusive. Consider Monash University or List of Monash University people. See if there are similar articles about the other schools with which Mr. Griffiths has been associated. Also, Order of Isabella the Catholic. I think you get the idea.

But as I wrote, neither of these is a serious problem. All in all, you wrote a nice article. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 20:15, 12 October 2011 (UTC)