User talk:Joho777

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Michael Clayton edits
Thanks for your interest in improving the Michael Clayton article. Your recent edits, however, add too much detail to the Plot description; per Fiction Plot style guidelines, not every detail should be included. Consequently, we don't need to know that Clayton's partner calls from Bermuda or that the client is "obnoxious" and "aggressive"; none of these elements is significant to the story line or to production or themes discussion in the article. Also, please carefully check your contributions for grammatical issues (e.g. "Eden's", consistent verb tense, parallel structure problems, possessive form, MoS style for numbers, etc.). I've reverted your good faith contributions to a version which is slimmer on the detail. If you feel any of the details are necessary to the article, feel free to initiate a discussion on the article's Talk page. Thank you, and enjoy editing here. Your contributions are welcome. Jim Dunning | talk  12:16, 22 June 2008 (UTC)

Good faith Glory Road edits
Thanks for your help in editing Glory Road. I've reverted your edits to a previous version without the additional detail. If you feel there are absolutely critical details missing from the summary of the novel's plot, please consider selective and concise additions that will maintain the section at a reasonable length. -- Rydra Wong (talk) 11:01, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

WP:NPOVand WP:OR additions to Beyond This Horizon
You added "and to use them to resolve personal problems and to punish other people for violating the gunman's beliefs" to a section involving the right to bear arms at the end of the article for Beyond This Horizon. I certainly hope you don't subscribe to the belief that people who favor private gun ownership do so to resolve their personal problems or punish other people who have different beliefs. Even if this is what you believe, it is both original research (seeWP:OR) and reflects a personal point of view (see WP:NPOV), neither of which has any place in a properly written wikipedia article. I urge you to be careful and neutral in tone when you edit Wikipedia articles. -- Rydra Wong (talk) 05:47, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Great Expectations (1998 film)
RE: Great Expectations (1998 film)

You added this sentence:


 * "The police sees the small boat heading out to sea."

This is incorrect.

If the police saw the boat with their eyes it would be:


 * "see"

If the commandeered the boat it would be:


 * "seize"

I am not sure which one you are trying to say here, and I have not seen the film.

4.240.159.160 (talk) 05:23, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

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