User talk:Jojo11234

Please can you explain your edit?
Hello Jojo11234,

What does "more secured" mean in the context of your edit to Unauthorized distribution of video games (diff)? I am not sure why you added it. Please can you explain? Thanks, DesertPipeline (talk) 09:29, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Draft Feedback: COCOA (Japanese app)
Hello, overall your translation draft for COCOA (Japanese app) is clear and easy to understand. I have some suggestions below.

Lead
 * I noticed that the lead has its own section heading. This wouldn't be necessary for the article.
 * It looks like "The new type of pneumonia close contact inquiry APP" is supposed to be the translated full name of COCOA. I would recommend just listing what COCOA stands for, which appears to be in English already.

Issues section
 * "Contact confirmation app" is listed twice because one was a translation used to explain the original English phrasing. As such, the "contact confirmation app" in parentheses can be deleted.
 * The subsection headings are understandable but also have room for improvement in readability, if you would like to try.

Notes and References
 * I don't see the section with the translation, so make sure you add this in before uploading.

Final suggestions (for everyone): -GlossomathisRabbit (talk) 09:57, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Make sure your article has the note about it being a translation from your language Wikipedia. Revisit the translation training modules to see how you can properly attribute authorship.
 * Make sure that the article's in-line citations are properly formatted. Revisit the citations training modules.
 * Before posting to the mainspace, do a final read through and check for typos, capitalization of proper nouns (ex. is your article about an app or law?), verb tense agreement, etc. The article does not need to be perfect--fellow Wikipedians will help edit--but it should be polished to the best of your ability.
 * Consider adding wiki links
 * Make sure that when you upload, the only thing in the draft is the article. Lab discussions should not appear in the mainspace.
 * Upload when you are ready. The article does not need to be published in the very first week our lab starts uploading. If you still have questions or want more feedback, reach out to your buddy or me (no real names on Wikipedia, but since this may be the first time you see my Wikipedia username, I'm the senior coordinator for the project who is not your buddy haha).