User talk:Jojo11234/COCOA (Japanese app)

Hi David,

This is an amazing translation article! The flow of the article is smooth and the language is professional. The structure is clear as well but I think function could appear before development. The tone is neutral as well without personal preferences. If you update the citations to the article it could be better.

The article is translated through many different translators such as google translate and Youdao translate and my own personal knowledge.Jojo11234 (talk) 06:26, 2 May 2021 (UTC)