User talk:Jojo11234/sandbox

Hi, David. I think your format and introduction are very clear. Your content and organization are also very organized. One suggestion is that maybe you can provide more context of what COCOA is although that is a Japanese app I still want more background information. Pluto desdemona 134340 (talk) 04:04, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi, David. For the blog, I think this is a very vivid story telling  blog and for semester and the length of the writing is also great for the readers. Pluto desdemona 134340 (talk) 01:00, 30 April 2021 (UTC)