User talk:Jokorare

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 * encouraging achievements, among others, winning the first prize in Festival Rock Remaja Jawa Timur East Java Youth Rock Festival  in Lumajang (1987). They then participated in a

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Hi, thanks for message. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. You have no references at all. Even if your external links are counted, one has no content, one is the band's own website and one is based on an interview with a band member. So you have no independent sources. References should be in-line so we can see what parts of the text each is supporting. None of the performers or songs appear to be notable enough o be linked to their own articles.
 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: quite encouraging achievements... biggest obsession at the time... unlikely victory... promising band...  frantically seeking... shot into the orbit around the top rock groups... to be taken into account... now the popularity of Power Metal are parallel to their senior Indonesian bands... A pretty fantastic sales figures... &mdash; basically, it's written like a review or a personal opinion piece rather than an encyclopaedia article (It was tagged for lack of sources or verifiable notability by another editor before I deleted it).

They may well be notable, but the page need some work. Do you want me to sandbox the deleted text for you to work on?  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:14, 6 October 2013 (UTC)