User talk:Jolukoya98

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Hello, Jolukoya98, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Miniskirt
Hi! I wanted to explain why I reverted your edits at miniskirt. The content had a few issues:

The first is that the material was written in too casual of a style for Wikipedia's purposes. The problem with this is that not only is it too casual, but it can also come across as promotional to some editors. Avoid using words like "dramatically" or phrases like "easy and affordable", as these come across as a bit promotional. If you're using it as part of a quote that's fine, but you need to mark it as a quote and attribute it along with a reliable source. Also be careful of making original research - all content must be backed up with a reliable source that explicitly makes the claims made in the added content. I noted that none of the sourcing you used actually backed up what you added, so make sure that you are careful of this in the future.

The second is the sourcing. Avoid using e-commerce sites like Forever 21 as a source, as this can make the article seem promotional and anything written by them should be taken with a grain of salt, since their main goal is to sell the viewer something. You should also generally avoid college newspapers. Sometimes they can be reliable sources, but only if they've received major awards and recognition for their coverage. Even then college papers tend to be kind of depreciated on Wikipedia, meaning that they aren't taken as seriously as say, a major newspaper like the New York Times.

Don't be discouraged - stuff like this happens to everyone! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:32, 28 September 2017 (UTC)