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Speedy deletion nomination of List of board game crowdfunding projects
Hello Jon.opus,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged List of board game crowdfunding projects for deletion, because the article doesn't clearly say why the subject is important enough to be included in an encyclopedia.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Josu4u (talk) 23:06, 14 October 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Panda Game Manufacturing (October 18)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Panda Game Manufacturing (October 19)
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LaMona (talk) 23:47, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest? Paid Editing
I noticed the pattern of your edits for a variety of companies, but few topical edits. Please read the following carefully if it pertains to you:

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COI Explanation

Notice of Conflict of interest noticeboard discussion
This message is being sent to inform you that there is currently a discussion at Conflict of interest/Noticeboard regarding a possible conflict of interest incident in which you may be involved. Thank you. LaMona (talk) 16:48, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

I've commented on this COI discussion. I am not a paid editor and have no interest or COI related to any of the articles I've edited save that I have authored a draft for a board game I designed. I have disclosed the COI on that draft in accordance with the conflict of interest guide. Jon Adams (talk) 19:13, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume-Bennett Lumber Company has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Cartography (board game) (October 26)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps (November 3)
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SwisterTwister  talk  08:27, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of List of board game crowdfunding projects


The article List of board game crowdfunding projects has been proposed for deletion&#32; because of the following concern:
 * A list of three non-notable games?

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, content or articles may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on |the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Fram (talk) 07:53, 18 November 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps (January 8)
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RadioFan (talk) 22:54, 8 January 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Cartography (board game) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cartography (board game). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 23:58, 16 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cartography (board game) (January 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 23:59, 16 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps (January 26)
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RadioFan (talk) 01:39, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

Talkback
RadioFan (talk) 14:16, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps (February 25)
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The comment they left was:

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Chrisw80 (talk) 05:18, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps (April 2)
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 333-blue  03:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Panda Game Manufacturing


Hello, Jon.opus. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Panda Game Manufacturing".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 16:20, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Kings River Lumber Company


Hello, Jon.opus. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Kings River Lumber Company".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me</i> 11:58, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hume Lake Christian Camps has been accepted
<div style="border:solid 1px #57DB1E; background:#E6FFE6; padding:1em; padding-top:0.5em; padding-bottom:0.5em; width:20em; color:black; margin-bottom: 1.5em; margin-left: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> Hume Lake Christian Camps, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Sulfurboy (talk) 06:57, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
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