User talk:Jon Shankland

December 2018
Hello, I'm Pjposullivan. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, London Welsh RFC, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Pjposullivan (talk) 18:24, 23 December 2018 (UTC)

London Welsh
Hi Jon, sorry for not replying earlier, I gave Wikipedia a break over Christmas. Thank you for updating the information about London Welsh, genuinely, the updates are more than welcome. It was just the adjectives that could not be included. All the London Welsh article needs are more facts, not replacing technical phrases with promotional language. Also, if you can cite a secondary source to go with your changes, that would be great. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask, happy editing! Pjposullivan (talk) 18:00, 28 December 2018 (UTC)

London Welsh
Hi PJ - no problem at all and hope you had a good Xmas.

Not sure what you mean as I thought Wikipedia was just the story or facts and updates about a club? Some of what is currently said is not factually correct and indeed gives the wrong impression. Do you know who writes the actual articles and how these can be altered?

What can I now say / change ?

Does that mean I can write about the club as long as I don’t replace what is already written?

Thank you for your help.

Jon Jon Shankland (talk) 18:41, 28 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I've restored the bits you added that concerned the current position and staff of the club. All the phrases and words that could be seen as promotional or advertising, such as 'world-famous', 'vibrant' and 'greatest' have been removed. As a rule of thumb, anything that is verifiable and written from a neutral point of view can be included, replacing or adding to anything already in the article. Hope all this helps, I'm not sure who are the main contributors to the London Welsh article, it seems that not many people are keeping an eye on it. Best regards, Pjposullivan (talk) 16:32, 1 January 2019 (UTC)