User talk:Jon pardoe

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kiell Smith-Bynoe (November 18)
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KylieTastic (talk) 20:46, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kiell Smith-Bynoe (November 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheAafi was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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─ The Aafī (talk) 21:16, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

Hi Jon, I wandered into the KSB draft while listening to this mornings RHLSTP. I wondered if you were watching the twitch recording of that? I've looked at Kiell's credits and it looks like some sort of article could be justified. I don't think what you did was ready for a number of reasons- namely that IMDB is considered on a par with wikipedia itself and not a source. Similarly the ghosts link to the BBC won't cut the mustard.

I've had a go at editing the article, and will try again later. I'll also try and rope in other RHLSTP listeners and Ghosts/Stath viewers. There ought to be some wikipedia editors there who could pitch in.

Rankersbo (talk) 08:09, 2 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Just to let you know your article has been further developed and is now published. 88.98.88.239 (talk) 13:20, 22 December 2020 (UTC)