User talk:JonathanBaker13

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoni (August 11)
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AngusW🐶🐶F ( bark  •  sniff ) 15:40, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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JonathanBaker13 (talk) 16:18, 11 August 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for your quick feedback! I will remove the YouTube videos that don't mention Neoni's music and leave the videos that do.

Regarding "Please show how they have charted on Billboard and related national music awards/accolades.", this is shown towards the bottom of the article. Do you have any recommendations of how I could rework the sentence, "Their rendition of Carry On Wayward Son Charted at #6 on Billboard’s Top TV Songs Chart in November of 2020", so it's clearer in relation to the citation?

Many thanks for your help! Jonathan

Your submission at Articles for creation: Neoni (September 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Mikehawk10 were:

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— Mikehawk10 (talk) 01:34, 22 September 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Neoni
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:25, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Neoni


Hello, JonathanBaker13. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Neoni".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 06:47, 1 July 2022 (UTC)