User talk:Jonathanb150/sandbox

Caeden Meade & Peter Galfas Article Peer Review:
 * The article is well written in plain English, with unbiased language and well-sourced facts.
 * The "Microfibril" section of the article duplicates some of the information found in the lead of the original Microfibril stub article. If you intend for the "Microfibril" section to replace the lead found in the original stub, you might want to remove the section header to allow for this information to be placed in the lead position above the table of contents.
 * There are no citations in the "Microfibril" section. You should consider adding some.
 * Missing comma in "Microfibril" section: "... found in connective and structural tissue including skin,lungs, and hair"
 * There are no links to other Wikipedia articles within your sandbox. We recommend adding some to aid reader comprehension. If you need it, here is the Wikipedia how-to: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Linking
 * Citations are somewhat sparse in the "Structure" section.
 * It might be helpful to add an image to the "Cell wall" section to more easily craft a mental image of the angular arrangements discussed in this section.
 * There are no citations in the second paragraph of the "Cell Wall" section. You might consider adding some.
 * Article uses a lot of jargon, you need to either add links to articles explaining these terms or simplify the language
 * Each section only has a single source, and some of them are fairly old, information should be cross-referenced to make sure its up to date
 * Overall seems very focused on very in-depth ideas without explaining the fundamental concepts: i.e. what organisms have microfibrils? what are some everyday examples (i.e. hair)
 * Fibrillin, collagen and elastin microfibrils need links to their own articles included. This section also needs some more proofreading
 * The table of contents should be below the introduction
 * More images would probably be a good idea
 * The introduction has no citations
 * — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ptgalfas (talk • contribs) 10:02, 12 November 2018 (UTC)