User talk:Jongrnl

What I'm thinking about
I am thinking about doing the wiki article on: Abbas Ibn Firnas; Al-Saghani; Abū Sahl al-Qūhī; Ibn Sahl; Taqi ad-Din Muhammad ibn Ma'ruf;

I think the last one looks the most interesting.


 * All of these look great. Work on whichever you find most interesting and can find the most information on.  Thanks.

Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Jongrnl (talk) 02:41, 13 May 2014 (UTC)

Peer Review
Great addition on the Istanbul Observatory. There is a lot of great information here for you to use. Would consider breaking up the long introduction. I think you could make a new section on the astronomical tables of the Kings of Kings as you have enough information. This would allow you to make the long intro more aesthetically pleasing while expanding on that issue.

Overall, good looking page. Expand where applicable (I don't know what you've found just yet) and add external links where appropriate.

Nickeckenrode (talk) 15:37, 3 June 2014 (UTC)

June 2014
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