User talk:Jonknox12

Jonknox12 (talk) 17:04, 12 January 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (February 16)
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 Ts12rAc talk to me 17:48, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Denise C. Park (February 16)
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 Ts12rAc talk to me 18:12, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (February 16)
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>>> Wgullyn . talk ; 18:17, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Denise C. Park (February 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Wgullyn was:

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>>> Wgullyn . talk ; 18:28, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (February 16)
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HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:51, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Denise C. Park (February 17)
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SamHolt6 (talk) 16:04, 17 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Texas Biomedical Device Center (February 18)
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-Liancetalk/contribs 03:52, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Denise C. Park (February 20)
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Devonian Wombat (talk) 08:26, 20 February 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Denise C. Park has been accepted
 Denise C. Park, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. It is commonplace for new articles to start out as stubs and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

Since you have made at least 10 edits over more than four days, you can now create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for creation if you prefer.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! >>> Ingenuity . talk ; 18:58, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Roderick Heelis has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Roderick Heelis. Thanks! Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 02:24, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Robert Rennaker


The article Robert Rennaker has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern: "Paid contribution - a draft with the exact same content is awaiting review and the creation here is an attempt (quite likely in good faith) to circumvent that process"

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, pages may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Melcous (talk) 03:50, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Robert Rennaker (March 11)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 06:22, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Nomination of Walter Voit for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Walter Voit is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Walter Voit until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. David notMD (talk) 15:58, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Your ref#4 is not just that he is a member of AIMBE, but that he was elected to College of Fellows. Making that clear might improve the article being retained. David notMD (talk) 16:46, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you, I'll be sure to do that.
 * Best, Jonknox12 (talk) 16:48, 11 March 2022 (UTC)
 * You are allowed to add a "Keep" to the deletion discussion. The process is not a vote. At the end (7-14 days) an Administrator will make a decision. P.S. Might help a bit if any of the references state that he is tenured faculty. David notMD (talk) 15:01, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Texas Biomedical Device Center (TxBDC) (April 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

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 DGG ( talk ) 22:53, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Shalini Prasad moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Shalini Prasad, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of " " before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Hitro talk 18:26, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shalini Prasad has been accepted
<div style="border:solid 1px #57DB1E; background:#E6FFE6; padding:1em; padding-top:0.5em; padding-bottom:0.5em; width:20em; color:black; margin-bottom: 1.5em; width: 90%;"> Shalini Prasad, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! StarryGrandma (talk) 01:20, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Proper referencing and article content
Since you are creating Wikipedia articles as part of your job, please learn how to do references properly so unpaid volunteers don't have to fix them. A web link is not enough since sites move web pages around. Please include the publisher, date, and authors if any as well as the title. See the tutorial at Help:Introduction, particularly the section on referencing with Visual Editor which makes it easy. User:Nick Moyes/Easier Referencing for Beginners is also a good read.

Academic articles should also include the person's educational background. Shalini Prasad's faculty webpage is a good reference for hers. StarryGrandma (talk) 01:22, 26 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi there, [user:StarryGrandma:StarryGrandma],
 * When I began making articles, I had tried to use these faculty websites in the past, but they were not accepted as independent sources, since the websites were hosted by the facility for which these people worked. Is this not the case, or have I misunderstood what your suggestion is?
 * Best,
 * Jonknox12 (talk) 15:37, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Yes. You need to disclose for ALL the articles you're writing. In addition, I just went through a couple, and way too much of the writing is promotional, resume-style, and/or improperly verified. SECONDARY sources please. We're writing an encyclopedia, not a set of tenure or promotion applications. Drmies (talk) 18:22, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Roderick Heelis (May 16)
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Gusfriend (talk) 08:16, 16 May 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (June 14)
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Gusfriend (talk) 08:20, 14 June 2022 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Texas Biomedical Device Center
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:02, 25 July 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Texas Biomedical Device Center


Hello, Jonknox12. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Texas Biomedical Device Center".

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Concern regarding Draft:Roderick Heelis
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Concern regarding Draft:Dallas Lifespan Brain Study
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Your draft article, Draft:Dallas Lifespan Brain Study


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Your draft article, Draft:Roderick Heelis


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Nomination of Walter Voit for deletion
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