User talk:Jonnybling/sandbox

Your introduction to your article is very strong and you gave a lot of information on DJ Esco. From this introduction learned a lot about DJ Esco and his life and how be began making music as well as what he is still doing today. One thing you might need to change is maybe give some more background information on his childhood and how he met Future and what he's doing and some more information about himself and not just his music.

Darrendi (talk) 17:22, 18 October 2016 (UTC)Darren DiRocco

- Remember to put years in the entry. You wrote "this summer", someone could read this next year so be more "generic". Ctysick (talk) 11:31, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

Since DJ Esco is known for creating music you might want to find an interview with him where he talks about the purpose of his art and include that into the article as many musicians have claimed their music comes from a need to express something what is his?Awalcant (talk) 04:17, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

You have a lot of information about DJ Esco coming from a variety of credible sources. I like how you added in the story about he came up with the name for his mixtape, I thought it was pretty interesting and definitely something most people wouldn't know about him. You say in the first paragraph that DJ Esco has done a lot of collabs with Future, my suggestion to improve the article would be to write a small section about some of their collaborations. Your page is solid, let's hope it doesn't get taken down again! Karahabo (talk) 02:20, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

I know DJ Esco is relatively new to the rap game so this a good amount of information that you have given on him. I liked how you gave how many downloads he has received from his mixtape. You may want to add if you can find any future projects he may be starting. Tejaspav (talk) 18:05, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

looking much better. I would take elements and design tips from Metro Boomin's entry https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metro_Boomin Ctysick (talk) 16:17, 29 November 2016 (UTC)