User talk:Jonnyepstein1

Ra'anana
It's good to see someone bringing in more material, but the texts you are adding are clearly from some advertising brochure and thus unsuitable here. You need to sum up the material in good English, without boastful wording like "thriving" and "prosperous" and the "best." Please stick to the facts, and add a reliable reference for each statement.--Gilabrand (talk) 10:20, 7 March 2010 (UTC)

Gila, I’m just about to start the edit and source/reference. I produced this document recently for the municipality and will be personalizing the content over the next few days. Thank you for the heads up, it's much appreciated. Jonnyepstein1 (talk) 10:28, 7 March 2010 (UTC)