User talk:Jonpark47/Diane Schenandoah/Bibliography

Jonpark47,

I think you have a great start to your page. The biography has a good amount of information, but I think a few things could be formatted differently. In the biography, there should be hyperlinks to other Wikipedia pages. For example, "Oneida, New York," "Clifford Schenandoah," "Onondaga Nation,"Maisie Schenandoah,"Jazz,"Haudenosaunee," etc., are all examples of things that should have a hyperlink (if there is a Wikipedia page for them). Another important thing to add is in-text citations. There should be many citations of where you obtained these facts throughout all the different sections, not just at the end of the page. Additionally, your bullet points in the Exhibition section should be bold round dots, not dashes. Under the Exhibition and Collection sections, each museum, city, and exhibition that has a Wikipedia page should have a hyperlink to that page. As far as your references section, it is not currently in the proper format so make sure to fix that before you submit it. There is a Wikipedia specific way of adding references in footnotes that you should use. I would recommend looking at other published Wikipedia pages for reference. Also, you have the reference section included twice on your page. I noticed that you also do not have an info box. If you are struggling with finding it, I found mine on the templates section after I searched "info box". Overall, you have a great start and a good amount of information. Good job!

Maxygaga (talk) 05:48, 25 February 2020 (UTC)