User talk:JordanTaylor96/sandbox

From Dr. Cohen: Both are fine but age segregation relates much more to the sociological framing. Have a look at what kinds of literature are out there and see what you can find. You did not say which one you prefer so just let me know with next week's assignment.

Personal critiques: - review sentence structure -still look at and try to find a good definition to add to the article - possibly improve flow of paragraph — Preceding unsigned comment added by JordanTaylor96 (talk • contribs) 21:28, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the peer review edit! I will implement what you said into my article. Solcsydney (talk) 14:19, 21 March 2018 (UTC)