User talk:Jordanannunziata/American Mafia/Wjenn001 Peer Review

Will Jennings Dr. Kirstin Isgro Communication & Culture Peer Review for Jordan Anunziata: American Mafia

First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

The article along with the edits help provide a clear structure leading up to explanations in the article.

What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

The article is actually put together really well, and well-balanced. The author provided good information about the Italian-American crime families, and where those families originated. This improves the article because it better represents what the American Mafia was, and is today.

What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? I’d say the most important thing the author could do is talk more about the influence on today's mafia, and the crimes still committed under the names of some of the most famous crime bosses in history.

Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!

My article relates to religion nationalism, so I don’t think it’d help much, but something I could use is the use of ‘neutral content.’ When writing or researching about religion it’s important to be culturally and religiously appropriate.