User talk:Jordangoody

Your submission at Articles for creation: Brenden Shucart (April 8)
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Libby norman (talk) 23:06, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
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Your message on my talk page re Brenden Shucart
Hi Jordangoody, thanks for your message and not annoying at all. This looks much better with some stronger sources, although note that Facebook is not considered a valid reference and blogs are not judged as uniformly reliable (depends on the source, notability of the source and standards of the source, so Huffpo better than a blog by one individual not many readers have heard of that is largely his/her take on life). I won't be re-reviewing as I prefer to let another editor see something I've previously reviewed. You might want to find a reference for his appearance in Interior.Leather Bar – especially as it's under a different name. Also not sure about the quotes in the para on HIV – they seem overlong and not very clearly explained. Is that three separate quotes on PrEP? If it is I'd suggest paraphrasing to tell us his views and then just using one quote, especially since two of them seem to be referring to a brand-name drug. I assume he has no promotional/spokesperson links to any pharma companies? Do bear in mind that editors are usually quite suspicious about covert advertising – only because a lot of organisations try it on! Once you're ready, just press the resubmit and another editor will review. Hope that helps and good luck. Libby norman (talk) 12:29, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Brenden Shucart was accepted
 Brenden Shucart, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Fiddle  Faddle  08:56, 17 May 2014 (UTC)
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Wikilinking
Hi, and thanks for your work on the English Wikipedia.

I noticed an article you worked on. Just a short note to point out that we don’t normally link:
 * dates
 * years
 * commonly known geographical terms (including well-known country-names), and
 * common terms you’d look up in a dictionary (unless significantly technical).

This applies to infoboxes, too.

Thanks, and my best wishes.

Tony  (talk)  04:08, 21 May 2014 (UTC)