User talk:Jordankp96

Ultimate Spider-Man (TV series)
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Ultimate Spider-Man (TV series), as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because websites with user-generated content cannot be used as sources under USERG, which is part of Wikipedia's Reliable Sources policy. This includes personal blogs, forums, wikis, or any site whose content is derived from uncredentialed users, volunteers, amateurs, etc, such as imdb. The source you cited is clearly labeled as such, as it states at the bottom of that piece, "This article was submitted by a volunteer contributor." Another clue to this is the incoherent writing. The opening line of subheading, for example, reads: "If you think Ultimate spider-man tv series will get more mature and adds more drama to the, stupidly portrayed character, then you are out of luck!" When the opening line of an article features multiple proper nouns that aren't capitalized, misplaced commas, a lack of definite articles, etc., that's a pretty good indication that it isn't written by a credentialed writer. Similar passages appear further down in that piece ("Any chance you fix ultimate spiderman cartoon?"), which sound like they were written by someone who failed grade school English. If you find sources that adhere to WP:Identifying Reliable Sources, however, feel free to re-add the material to the article.

Similarly, please make sure your own contributions reflect the quality expected of an encyclopedia. Sentences like "With the episodes showing no improvement and comment made by Joe Quesada..." are not coherent. One suggestion is to use the Preview function to check your edits before saving them. Another is to compose your material in a word processing programming that features SpellCheck or GrammarCheck.

Lastly, wikilinks only require double brackets around the linked term. The link to the Joe Quesada article, for example, is simply Joe Quesada. There is no need for a piped link featuring the term with an underscore in between the two parts of his name. You can learn more about how to make wikilinks at WP:Wikilink. If you need further help, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 03:16, 6 May 2012 (UTC)