User talk:Jordanwunderli/sandbox

Possible Topics:

- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sumo (Sumo Wrestling) - Uniforms - Highest competition for Sumo Wrestler - Sumo in the current days - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Feminism_in_Japan (Feminism in Japan) - What is feminism like now? - Japanese males' opinions on feminism - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Photo_booth (Photo booths) - When did purikura start? (history) - iPad Kiosks

Feedback on possible topics
These look like good potential choices, and I like that you've identified some specific areas you could work on. You can let the research be your guide from here, making the final decision of what to work on based on what you find the best sources about.

FYI, you posted this on the Talk page for your sandbox, rather than the sandbox itself. Ctextor at uofu (talk) 14:12, 25 September 2019 (UTC)

COMMENT ON PEER REVIEW OF CONTENT CONTRIBUTION

Overall, I found your contribution to be a great addition to the Sumo article. In my opinion, the organization of your rough draft is clear and concise and the information you choose to add contributes to not only the attire worn in Sumo but some of the other characteristics and defining features as well such as hairstyle. If there is one area of improvement that I may suggest, it would be to just add more information and increase the length of your contribution. It was rather short but I assume you are planning to add more details as you do more research in the coming weeks. U1089327 (talk) 04:50, 9 November 2019 (UTC) Adam B.