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Week 11 - Peer Review by Elizabeth Dollmont
This article is very well done and provides a good explanation of what interspecies friendship is. It is great that you gave a definition for domestication and mutualism when you starting writing about their connections to your topic in the article. For your Human-Animal species friendship section you could add why we originally started to domesticate dogs and form relationships with them. Adding a part to this section where you talk about animal's used in therapy could be beneficial. You could also talk add to the section to talk about the domestication of horses and cats. You did a great job of delivering a neutral tone in this article. You could benefit from a bit more sourcing but the sources that you do have cited seem to be very reliable and valid. Overall, you have a well written article and I look forward to your presentation.