User talk:Jordynnpalethorpe/Susie King Taylor

Hi Jordan! I think what you have so far gives a good outline of Susie King Taylor's life. I think it would be great to include a little more info to connect the events. Something that the module suggested was having a lead space that overviews their contributions! I think you mention this stuff towards the end which works but maybe mentioning it earlier on would be good! It might also be good to give just a brief history of her life in the style of wikipedia (when she was alive, her contributions) UPDATE: !! The edits are for a pre-existing page. so including this (and the context in the sandbox) will give the reader a better understanding of the changes. Overall, great work and it's clear that you're heading in the right direction given your sources and work. - CRR