User talk:JorgeM13/sandbox

It seems like you have a lot of information and your research look very accurate, I would only recommend that take a little time and organize the information, that would be my only comment. Good Luck!!

Hi Jorge, It looks like you have a lot of great information to add the the article already on wikipedia. It is extremely hard to read because its unorganized and the references you have mixed with the information made it a little confusing. I would suggest you copy the main article already on wikipedia onto your sandbox then add this information to it. It would make organizing it a lot easier. It looks like the spelling and grammar is good. It also loos like the you have a good amount of references. Good Job. 72.199.27.251 (talk)forsyth.amber72.199.27.251 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 01:23, 16 November 2013 (UTC)