User talk:JoseLara/sandbox

Hey, this is Somara! Good work with your articles so far! I think you've chosen great sources and are on track, but I do have some suggestions that will hopefully be helpful:

For the DataKind article For the Political Apathy article
 * you could add a small section on the background of the company, maybe a few short sentences about how it started, where the first office was, and how it expanded
 * you should also rewrite the way you listed the offices and change them to all cities, e.g. New York, London (or whatever city the office is in)... instead of New York, the United Kingdom...
 * because it's a new article, you should try to add more sections just so it isn't classified a stub, maybe if you can find more info on their past work, or if they have a mission statement on their website you could use that
 * you could create a small section on the psychology of voter apathy because you've already included the Google research paper about interested bystanders and that had some cool information on why people don't civically engage

Otherwise everything is looking good and you should try to start working on the civic engagement article if you haven't already. Good luck! Somara S (talk) 01:55, 29 November 2016 (UTC)