User talk:Josemanuelca

Proposed deletion of Ricardo Jaar
Hello, Josemanuelca. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Ricardo Jaar, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Ricardo Jaar to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.

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Thanks, Falkirks 20:02, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Can you add date of birth please, thanks. In ictu oculi (talk) 01:54, 25 May 2013 (UTC)

Ricardo Jaar
Hi, thanks for message. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, or they will be deleted. Although you gave references, they were to organisations closely associated with Jaar, not independent - in fact one was written by him. Because the references were not in-line, it was also difficult to see what fact each was supporting, and the use of bare urls makes them hard to read.
 * There should not be any external links in the text, putting multiple direct links to the University and TV is just spamming
 * It was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: ''Founder of the first private university... the first private industrial zone in Honduras... he first of its kind in Latin America... cultural innovators... all of whom were guided by... The mission adopted by these leaders... new and alternative opportunities... in a challenging and limitless educational atmosphere... 300 academic professors... advanced degrees in their areas of expertise... continues to grow meeting the needs of the professional community... to benefit the entire community... well known for its commitment to provide sustainable and affordable... He has devoted his recent efforts to provide a high quality educational media model... He has set the bar high for all those who wish to follow ... numerous awards for his efforts... consolidating the lead of the USPS among the Central American private universities
 * It's a bit obsequious to always refer to him as "Dr. Ricardo J. Jaar"; surname only without titles is normal style. Fully capitalising awards is spammy too, especially when it turns out that the award was for his father, not him.
 * There is a large irrelevant chunk about the university, its courses (spam), its professors and its founding by his father, who is not the subject of the article. Notability is not inherited, his father's achievements are irrelevant.
 * The article was created in a single edit without wikilinks or references, and looks as if was copied from an unknown and possibly copyrighted source.

 Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  16:27, 28 May 2013 (UTC)