User talk:Josepazmino/Isolation transformer

Hello. I like the topic that you are researching. However, I found a few errors that I think can clean up in order to tighten up your grade.

First off is a grammatical errror that I noticed. With the sentence involving the Primary and Secondary current flow, I noticed the comma after Primary when separating the two sentences. The comma is not needed there. The overall sentence structure is kind of choppy also. Instead of saying "One side is connected to the AC voltage and calls Primary", you could say "The primary side is coonected to the AC voltage" or something belong those lines. Otherwise, great information there.

Also, the first citation is not taking me anywhere else. Your second and third ones were, but not the first one.

Lastly, once you get farther down the line with your article, make sure that the formatting is neat and presentable. Your article had me looking around a lot.

Other than those three things, you presented good details about your topic. I can't wait to read more! Good luck!

Luke J

Prince's Peer Review
I'm very interested in your topic and think you handled the information well. I think that maybe the info in the lead could be cut down and used to flesh out the body of the article more. This would help the article be easier to read and flow. Also, the first citation does not work even if the others do. I think the info placement could be a little neater but other than that I really enjoyed your article. I am feeling some inspiration for my own article so thank you!Princekahree washington (talk) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Princekahree washington (talk • contribs) 00:53, 25 March 2021 (UTC)